Whitesonic's Reviews

[Potion Shop]

Super cute art style and very fluid animation backed up by a nice, simple plot. The characters are likeable and even though it was a short it had me wondering what would happen next for most of its duration. Please, make more!

[The Crawler]

Great animation and justice ending. What's not to like?

[AGG: Kirby and Metaknight]

It's all right.

I don't think it was a bad idea, i just think it needed following up rather than finishing with Meta Knight putting on his mask. Like, we know why Meta Knight has a grudge now, but it doesn't show how he gets his cape, his sword, how he gets to continuously clashing with Kirby. You might've felt that all this was irrelevant to the story, but snapshots of it (even just still pictures for a second or two) along with the right music would've helped.

What really kills the story is the lack of conclusion, however. It should've ended with the same scenario that it started with. Like we completely forgot that Kirby and Meta Knight were fighting over a crystal shard a few seconds ago. Getting back to it and finishing what they started would've really helped wrapping it up (or at least deliver a better punchline).

It's a shame, really, because you're definitely gifted as an animator. It's well drawn, well shaded and the backgrounds certainly don't lack any detail. It's really well done, but the story kinda kills it for seeming somewhat incomplete.

[Blue]

I like. To be honest, this would suit a chill lounge background track just fine. It has a positive melody carried along by a strong, steady beat and i could see myself spacing out to it while grinding on a game, drawing or cracking a cold one open while i work through some emails. So yeah, if i can listen to this while trying to get through stuff i guess i could listen to this while i do pretty much anything.